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devil's in the night by ~Drako059:iconDrako059:

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"The devil’s  in the night”
by Drako059

Yellow eyes glistening in the night
They make me scream afraid with fright
There staring at me
Hunger ablaze
Tempting me with a mysteriously lingering gaze

A curdling scream in the distance
Fills me with even more contagious fright
I start to pray
Even cry
There are now six eyes in sight

When I can’t stand the night
I draw together my nerves to use
My only flash Light
I’m shocked and laughing at this feet

I stare at this remarkable sight
a family of rabbits was the demon
of terror this night
it’s ironic
now they huddle up close in fright
©2006-2009 ~Drako059
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it's not what you might think the titlemakes your mind think of what it may be. if it sucks tell me so i havent written a poem in a long while let me know what you all think and what not
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~DevilsSpawn:iconDevilsSpawn: Mar 7, 2006, 8:19:40 PM
awwww that's so damned cute... you know rabbits are the most fearsome of creatures? take your head right off those damned ferocious buggers.... :paranoid:
BUt you said to say what I thught, coz you haven't written for a while, I enjoyed it, I love reading a more fun, uplifting kinda piece now and then and I just found it adorable :P

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I'd Rather Be A Freak Then A Sheep.

Freedom; Another Way Of Saying Death.

~DevilsStock ~DAIntoxicated
~Drako059:iconDrako059: Mar 7, 2006, 11:25:50 PM
ty are rabbits that dangerus? ^^;

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"i don't mind the sun some times, the image that it shows.
I can taste you on my lips, and smell you in my clothes.
cinnamon, and sugary, and softly broken right.
You never know just how you look through other peoples eyes"
-Butthole Surfers song:Pep
~DevilsSpawn:iconDevilsSpawn: Mar 8, 2006, 12:19:19 AM
oh totally!!! haven't you ever seen monty pythons Holy grail? :rofl:

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I'd Rather Be A Freak Then A Sheep.

Freedom; Another Way Of Saying Death.

~DevilsStock ~DAIntoxicated
~ryostag:iconryostag: Mar 8, 2006, 6:29:36 AM
i was thinking something scarier but it's cute! i wonder what kind of picture would be posted with a title like this...

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i see the fire burning in your eyes
it melts away the ice in my heart
lift away, cloud of darkness
set me into a realm of your warmth
hide me in the folds of your clothes
and keep me safe until this all blows over.
~Drako059:iconDrako059: Mar 11, 2006, 5:55:46 PM
i don't know maybe nist with mistly like bunny ears o0 why don't you try and draw a picture for it (if i ever find out how to make pictures go with them and people would draw somne for me then i would happily suply the art work and thank them :)

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"i don't mind the sun some times, the image that it shows.
I can taste you on my lips, and smell you in my clothes.
cinnamon, and sugary, and softly broken right.
You never know just how you look through other peoples eyes"
-Butthole Surfers song:Pep
~Drako059:iconDrako059: Mar 11, 2006, 6:05:41 PM
i think i have o0;

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"i don't mind the sun some times, the image that it shows.
I can taste you on my lips, and smell you in my clothes.
cinnamon, and sugary, and softly broken right.
You never know just how you look through other peoples eyes"
-Butthole Surfers song:Pep
~DevilsSpawn:iconDevilsSpawn: Mar 11, 2006, 6:39:05 PM
it's highly amusing :)

--
I'd Rather Be A Freak Then A Sheep.

Freedom; Another Way Of Saying Death.

~DevilsStock ~DAIntoxicated
~ryostag:iconryostag: Mar 14, 2006, 1:45:22 PM
lemme steal a scanner and i'd be more than happy too! :D

--
i see the fire burning in your eyes
it melts away the ice in my heart
lift away, cloud of darkness
set me into a realm of your warmth
hide me in the folds of your clothes
and keep me safe until this all blows over.
~Drako059:iconDrako059: Mar 16, 2006, 6:00:37 PM
lol ok go for it :p

--
"i don't mind the sun some times, the image that it shows.
I can taste you on my lips, and smell you in my clothes.
cinnamon, and sugary, and softly broken right.
You never know just how you look through other peoples eyes"
-Butthole Surfers song:Pep
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